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no place to go
today has ended
all that's seen
is pretended
it's your mind
beyond the crying
cold dead eyes
from life are hiding
drifting, drifted
sadness weds
mourning heart
to darkest dread
shattered dreams
abandoned sleep
walk the maze
of memories keep
shut the gates
bar the doors
from could've beens
and never mores
....
©2008-2010 =time-warrior
:icontime-warrior:

Author's Comments

... :shrug: ... just tired of being in a rut, I think.

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:iconwinterflood:
Ah, Artists and ruts, will they never be separated.

Good work.

:hug:
:iconblueskye27:
This one hits close to home for me. Nice poem. :hug:
:icontime-warrior:
perhaps ... long enough to create a new rut and yearn for the old, maybe.

Thanks for reading and the kind words.I appreciate it. :hug:

--
Live simply. Love generously. Care deeply. Speak kindly.
:icontime-warrior:
:hug:

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Live simply. Love generously. Care deeply. Speak kindly.
:iconsenoritarin:
i love this! i don't know why but it matches my mood right now. had to read this one out loud a few times just for fun, it really flows. :D

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"A wonderful fact to reflect upon, that every human creature is constituted to be that profound secret and mystery to every other."

-Charles Dickens, A Tale of Two Cities
:icontime-warrior:
:hug: We all feel that way sometimes.
It is better if you say it out loud, hee, I just tried it-thanks for the insight. :)

--
Live simply. Love generously. Care deeply. Speak kindly.
:icontec-thepenofmerlin:
I like the ending...

...make sure I take another look at this when I'm actually able to interpret and not just get through my deviations inbox, okay? (Please?--the magic word didn't fit naturally into that sentence...)

Merlin

--
"Pray for rain, lose your name,
and watch all your dreams fall through."

The Interview
, by AFI
:icontime-warrior:
Yay! I'm happy you like even part of it. :D

Okey-dokey, I'll make sure you look at this again ... just how do you prefer I do this? Note?

Thank you for reading this I am honored. ^_^

T. W.

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Live simply. Love generously. Care deeply. Speak kindly.

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